Sunday, December 11, 2011

Learning Through Technology


Nyomi Mosley
ENG 102
Cline
9 December
                                                         Learning through Technology

I have found this class to be rewarding in some ways while in other ways hard. This class differs from other ways I have learned because I am so used to learning things from my parents or from a person. Having an online teacher was slightly strange for me, and hard, because it made things harder to grasp. When I was just reading things all the time I found that I got bored and uninterested in the learning part of the class. However, when I was watching the videos and learning about different things I was able to really grasp the things that professor Cline wanted us to learn, and I found that I was actually interested. Even though it was hard for me to grasp certain things from learning online I was able to learn one very important lesson. That lesson is that I need to be in a chair and sit and squirm and get frustrated in order to really grasp things that will teach me how to write better. Online learning has helped me to learn many things the hard way but I have grasped many of those things because I taught myself to take the time to learn about them.

The technology that helped me the most this semester were the videos that professor cline put on blackboard. Those videos showed me how to properly write an analysis and a summary. They also showed me how to use the library database, and they showed support from my teacher. Before I took this online class I had no idea how to use analysis and summary, or even a library database in an essay. People had explained them to me before but for some reason I learned more by watching how to use each of them than I learned from people telling me. I was encouraged in my learning process by the many videos Cline put on blackboard letting us know that she was available to help us if we ever needed it. I never went to her and asked for help but it was still nice to know that she was there if I ever needed it.
Out of all of the technologies we used in this class I found the videos to be the best and the most beneficial. Because I found them to be so beneficial I plan to use more videos in my future. I plan to make several videos of my family members to save memories and if we are allowed to in my next class I plan to use videos as well. I would really like to thank Professor Cline for providing such a wonderful class this semester. I truly enjoyed every part of it, and I have learned a lot to use next semester.
Here is the link for the visual; this site also has some insight to learning with technology:

Sunday, December 4, 2011

Final Project


Please enjoy! all of this information was taken from my own opinion of what I learned in my English 102 class at Yavapai College.

Saturday, December 3, 2011

Taking a Look Back

Nyomi Mosley
ENG 102
Cline
3 December, 2011
Taking a Look Back
I have learned so much in this writing class, and I believe that there are many things I can use towards my next class, specifically summary and analysis. If you can believe it, I had no idea what analysis was before I joined this class! I knew what summary was because I had written a few short explanations of objects or books. However, analysis was something very new to me, and it something that I plan to use in my future papers. I also plan to involve better punctuation. I noticed that in many of my essays this was something that I lacked, and so I would like to work on it in my future essays.
When it comes to reading in ENG 102 I found that many of the readings in this class were very enlightening and interesting. I especially enjoyed reading the poem called the tiger. I enjoyed its reference to God’s creation of the tiger very much. I also enjoyed reading Frankenstein because it enlightened me to an understanding of what some people go through in this world. I have met many people that live in poverty and have seen people that live on the streets. However, I never really understood what it is like for them. Reading Frankenstein and reading about his monster’s trials I was able to grasp what it would be like for those people living on the streets. I was deeply affected by this reading, and I must admit that I almost cried at one point. Frankenstein is now one of my most favorite pieces of literature.
I believe that there are some things in this class that I have learned very well , and others that I have yet to fully grasp. There were two things that I really understood which are: the difference between summary and analysis, and how to read literature. I believe that the reason why I really understood these two things was because they were the two things that I found to be very interesting.
I believe that I still am using the same writing process that I learned about in ENG 101. However, the thing that has changed is that I am now involving more of the summary and analysis to my writings.
I believe the most challenging thing for me in this class were my final drafts. I found that it was hard to change something that I had already written, and that I had my mind set on. I don’t think that this is a problem that I have overcome this semester. However, I am looking to make progress on it through practice in my future.
I would really like to thank Professor Cline for this excellent class. Through this class I learned many things that I did not previously know, and I was able to remember important things that I had forgotten. So thank you very much Professor Cline! I really enjoyed your class!
Here is the link for the picture:

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Learning about Zombies


Nyomi Mosley
Cline
ENG102
20 November, 2011

Whenever I read something I expect to be educated. Call it what you will but I expect whatever I read to be worth my while, and in order to that to happen I need to learn something from it. I found that the first chapter in the book called “American Zombie Gothic” was interesting and I learned a lot about Zombies. It was great to know that there are so many movies about zombies. Such as: Planet terror, resident evil, 28 days later, and so on. I have seen a few of the ones that Bishop mentioned but I was still shocked when I read about all the ones that were mentioned. I also found it interesting when it was mentioned that the times that movies were made were related to how the movies were made during that time period. I must admit that somewhere deep in the back of my head I knew that but I never really realized how true it was until after I read this chapter. Through various parts bishop points out many movies that relate to certain time periods and zombies. I was surprised by the fact that Zombies have no origin. He mentioned how all of the other fictional characters have an origin except all except for zombies. As I was reading through that part I started to think to myself about all the fictional characters I knew about and their origin. Cinderella originated from the book I read as a child as did all of the princess characters. Jack and Jill originated from that little rhyme I knew when I was younger. The wizard of Oz characters originated from the movie I watched when I was younger and still watch today; just for fun. All of the characters that I thought about had an origin. All except for the Zombies! It was really interesting to me how all of the points that Bishop made were very well supported. I also found that Bishop really researched his points this made his essay believable. I can defiantly say that this chapter was very well written. By the end I felt as if I had just been fully educated on something I knew nothing about before I started reading.
Here is the link for the picture:
http://www.zombieseverywhere.org/2011/08/story-time.html

Sunday, November 13, 2011

Love in the Art of Shakespeare


Nyomi Mosley
Cline
ENG 102
6 November, 2011
Love in the Art of Shakespeare
His poems have caught the eyes of many people across the world. He has enlightened the hearts of many through his work and brought upon several great discussions. Shakespeare is a well known author of poetry and drama, and he wrote many plays in during his lifetime. (World Book Encyclopedia, 342-347)Many of Shakespeare’s poems seem to follow a pattern. This pattern begins with and explanation of the main character then a love forms, and that love either ends in heartbreak or in a deep realization of truth. Included in this pattern Shakespeare tends to involve a feeling of being trapped. At many times his work includes characters such as Romeo and Juliet, who like some of his other characters in a few more of his poems seemed to be trapped away from love. Through all of his work he conveys a message to his audience. It is an amazing fact that many of his poetic works and plays still have the ability to uplift spirits, and will always be works of art that will last for generations to come.
Shakespeare’s sonnets from “Sonnets to Sundry Notes of Music” catch your eye from the moment you begin to read. This first sonnet is about a lord’s daughter that looked up to one man yet loved an Englishman. This tale ends with a choice the maiden made to go with the Englishman. In the words of Shakespeare: “But one must be refused; more mickle was the pain. That nothing could be used to turn them both to gain. For, of the two the trusty knight was wounded with disdain; Alas! She could not help it. The art with arms contending was victor of the day; which by a gift of learning did bear the maid away. Then by lullaby the learned man hath got the lady gay” (Shakespeare, 1311). After reading this sonnet and some more of Shakespeare’s comedic writings I will never feel the same way towards his writings. I have been surprised by the fact that many of his works are filled with rhymes that are cheerful and witty, and show a side of Shakespeare that is unfamiliar. The surprise that this poem brings to Shakespearian work is only one of the many things that make Shakespeare such a wonderful author.
However, not all of his work is witty and clever; most of his texts are very serious. Many of his works give excellent life lessons, such as sonnet number five of the “Sonnets to Sundry Notes of Music”. This sonnet is about a shepherd who is pleading with the lover to live out in the world together. The shepherd describes their life together as pleasurable and melodious. However, the lover realizes that the reality of living with this shepherd out in the world will not be as magical as the shepherd makes it seem (Shakespeare, 1312). The life lesson is to not let love get in the way of looking at reality. Many times people let love get in the way of family and of friends and of having a future. Shakespeare showed through the wisdom of the lover that there are things in this world other than love. He showed that we should learn to look at those things and not become blinded when love presents itself. In many of his texts he gives life lessons that are encouraging in the way of doing what is proper. This is another one of the things that makes Shakespeare such a great writer, and that has allowed his work to succeed for such a long time.
In some of the Shakespearian plays and poems the feeling of being trapped is expressed. According to the world book encyclopedia this play is said to be about: “Two teen aged lovers in Verona, Italy, who are caught in bitter feud between their families” (World Book Encyclopedia, 356). This play displays that Romeo and Juliet are trapped from expressing their love for each other due to a feud between their families. The story continues with Juliet’s father forcing her to marry a man who is not Romeo. At this point in the story we see the trapped feeling in Juliet. She feels that she cannot live trapped in a relationship with a man she does not love. Thus she chooses to take a drug that causes her to appear to be dead, so that she can escape. Juliet’s father believes she is dead and alerts the kingdom, and eventually this alert reaches Romeo. He does not know that Juliet is not dead but what he feels is that he cannot live without her; he feels trapped without Juliet. So he chooses to die by poisoning himself. Juliet eventually wakes up from her sleep and, realizing that Romeo is dead right next to her, sees that she too cannot live without him and so she decides to kill herself with a knife. This point in the story shows another instance of the trapped feeling. Romeo and Juliet cannot stand to be trapped in a loveless marriage or in a world away from each other’s love, and so they go through drastic measures in order to be together. The thing that Shakespeare is trying to convey through this play is that people will do anything for love. Yet, in other plays he suggests that this is not always the best road to take.
Shakespeare has written many wonderful poems. When I read my first poem by Shakespeare I began to really enjoy it by the time I reached the end of the first paragraph, and after every sentence I was encouraged to read on. The poem I read was called “A Lover’s Quarrel”. This poem involved two characters: A daughter, the one she loved, and a father.  The maiden in this poem is communicating with deepest regret to her father her sorrow over the man she married. This maiden developed a deep love for a man that she did not know very well, and she chose to act on it. She says to her father “But woe is me! Too early I attended a youthful suit, it was to gain my grace, of one by natures outwards so commended, that maidens’ eyes stuck over all his face. Love lacked a dwelling, and made him her place; and when in his fair parts she did abide, she was new lodged and newly deified.”(Shakespeare, 1306) She states earlier that she knew he was too young, and that other girls enjoyed being around him too much.  However, she ignored her wise judgment and rushed in, and when he asked her to marry him with “The deep green emerald” (Shakespeare, 1307) she openly consented. Throughout her marriage we see that she is trapped with a man that wants her to be with him yet continues to betray her. She expresses his betrayal with the following words: “Thus merely with the garment of a Grace the naked and concealed fiend he covered the unexperient gave the tempter place, Which like a cherubim above them hovered” (Shakespeare, 1308). As the story goes on she explains her reconciliation with this man to her father: “O! That infected moisture of his eye, O! That false fire which in his cheek so glowed. O! That forced thunder from his heart did fly. O! That sad breath his spongy lungs bestowed. O! All that burrow’s motion seeming owed. Would yet again betray the fore-betrayed and new pervert a reconciled maid” (Shakespeare, line 328). I learned from this poem that Shakespeare not only writes poetry, but he also teaches lessons. Through his poetry Shakespeare has the wisdom to express his opinion of love, and do so in a way that is not offensive to anyone.
In this poem Shakespeare wrote about the deep love that one person can have for another and how that love has the ability to betray and hurt. While I was reading this poem for the second time I noticed that Shakespeare involved a lesson about avoiding the pain that comes with certain types of love. In this poem he expressed through a tale that people should not do anything for love. He expressed through this story that, when love is not embraced in the proper way it can have harsh consequences. Shakespeare wanted his readers to understand that if they want to end up in differently than the maiden, they need to learn how to control their feelings until they gain knowledge of their prospective love. If the maiden had controlled her feelings, and taken the time to become aware of the man, then she would have lived a better life. This is a great life lesson and one that like Shakespeare’s work can be taught and learned for many years to come.
It is a fact that Shakespeare is a well known poet and play writer. To many he is considered one of the greatest around. Through performances of his plays, readings of his texts, and quotations of his powerful words Shakespeare has impacted many, and will continue to do so for a long time. Many of Shakespeare’s pieces have the power to tell a story and give a clever lesson. Through the understanding of Shakespearean writings this fact can be seen. Most of Shakespeare’s poems are filled with sad stories of love. Many of which include lessons of love, and how it should be handled. The work of Shakespeare shows that he is not only an excellent playwright and poet, but also that he is very wise.

 Works Cited
Shakeapeare, W. Sonnets to Sundry Notes of Music. In W. Craig, The Oxford Shakespeare (pp. 1311-1313). New York: Oxford University Press.
Shakespeare, W. A Lover's Complaint. In W. Craig, The Oxford Shakespeare (pp. 1305-1308). New York: Oxford University Press.
Wadsworth, F. W. (2000). William Shakespeare. In W. B. Encylopedia, Volume 17 (pp. 342-347). Chicago: World Book Encyclopedia.
Wadsworth, F. W. (2000). William Shakespeare. In W. B. Encylopedia, Volume 17 (p. 356). Chicago: World Book Encyclopedia.

Sunday, November 6, 2011

Annotated Biography



Shakespeare, W. A Lover's Complaint. In W. Craig, The Oxford of Shakespeare (pp. 1305-1308). Dublin: Oxford University Press.
In this source a quote is taken from the ending lines of "A Lover's Complaint" written by William Shakespeare. The way that Shakespeare ends his poem is so powerful and because of this it is essential to the effect of my essay. The effect that this essay holds on its readers is very important. Throughout Shakespeare's work he impacts his readers. This quote is a great way to represent that effect and that is why I would like to use it in my essay. It will bring in the passion of Shakespeare's poetry as well as add the drama that my essay needs in order to establish a meaningful paper for my readers. This quote will also be used to help the readers of this paper better understand the writings of Shakespeare in a significant way.

Shakespeare, W. Sonnetes to Sundry Notes of Music. In W. Craig, The Oxford of Shakespeare (p. 1311). Dublin: Oxford University Press.
In this source I used Shakespeare's first sonnet in "Sonnets of sundry Notes of Music" It is important for the readers of this essay to have this information in order for them to look at the poem themselves to so that they can see and believe that this essay is giving a proper explanation of Shakespeare's work. The plays and poems of Shakespeare are very well known and much respected. It is important that this essay properly interpret the work of Shakespeare since that is its main subject. In order for this to take place the readers of this essay must be able to access the material of Shakespeare and be sure that this essay explained it properly. There are many references to this source in my essay and so it is important that it is included.

Wadsworth, F. W. (2000). William Shakespeare. In W. B. Encyclopedia, Volume 17 (p. 356). Chicago: World Book Encyclopedia.
In this source I quote William Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet as found in the world book encyclopedia. The full story of Romeo and Juliet is excellent, and exactly what I am trying to explain to my readers. However, it is very long for me to involve in my essay, and would be very difficult to understand, and would take a lot of room to explain. In this quote, the full story of Romeo and Juliet is explained in a way that is simple for readers to understand. This quote summarizes the story of Romeo and Juliet, which will help me to quickly establish one of the many points I have in this essay. Because this story is a central point of one of my paragraphs and that paragraph is essential to my entire essay it is imperative that I use this quote to the greater effect of my essay.

Sunday, October 30, 2011

My Plan for the Final Essay


Nyomi Mosley
ENG 102
Cline
10-30-11
For my final project I plan to complete option #1. I chose this option because I would prefer to write about a real person rather than a fictional character. I hold nothing against fictional characters it’s just for some reason I found writing about an author to be more interesting. I was particularly interested with professor cline’s suggestion of Shakespeare. Unlike many other people, I know, I have not read any of Shakespeare’s work beyond the children’s version of Romeo and Juliet.  So in reading and writing about this author I would like to learn for myself about Shakespeare’s work and possibly give some insight to others about Shakespeare’s writings. I plan to read a variety of his work so that I can better understand his writing style from a broader perspective.  After I understand his style of work from this perspective I plan to find a topic that really captures his artistic style; one that will not take more than 7 pages to write about. I realize that in order for my essay to be in the proper formatting that was assigned to this paper I must shorten my topic. In order to do so I plan to do plenty of research. My research will be found either in the YC database or from books at my local library. I find these sources to be trustworthy because they are sources that were well researched and concluded to be true. I truly hope that this paper will be one of the best I have written, and I am looking forward to the final product.
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Here is a link with some tips that might help you in writing your own essay: http://lklivingston.tripod.com/essay/